Night Mistress

use baby name website. that's what I do. I look for the usual ones.

I saw that your profile said you were from the USA but I wasn't sure. Sorry! it's okay. Since i make so many grammar mistakes, i guess my proper english ...

Other reviewers may have pointed this out already but it seems to me like your first language is not English. Okay. I have to clear this up because I find ...

then you will love this story more when i edit the whole thing. the prologue and chapter one have already been edited, but i might go in again and edit ...

anit-pop: i have edited the first chapter already. I haven also change the title of my story too. as i edited the chapter, i am change the name too. the ...

I have never read both or them, so i don't know.

Do not read this version any more. go here if you really want to read this story.

mikeb1492: You read the other version. this is the rewrite version. don't posted that other version in here.

hey, Okay, i must said i am totally confused by this piece. i couldn't make heads or tails out of it. so what is the deal in this story? can ...

Hey, thank you so much for reading Poison Love. this is the link to the rewrite version which has been renamed Addicting Poison. again. thank you so much for reading.

Hey, this poem is pretty good. I don't see anything wrong with it. Sorry i can't be of more help. I do love the emotion though. It makes me feel ...

dreamworx95: thanks for your review. I have one question thought: did you read the actucal thing or did you just read the review? because I have already fix the opening. ...

This is a cute prologue! It is a prologue, right? Here's an idea: I'm assuming that this is a prologue and the whole rest of the story will be Eirian's ...

Okay, you guys. I tried to fix everything that you said was wrong with it. if you guys would come back and look at it again. I promised that the ...

it's really good. i Recommend it to a fantasy/action reader. and it's sequels.